A View From A Hill Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

A View From A Hill

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The glow of the sun,
The soft morning breeze,
I hear gentle whispers,
Pass through the trees.

The birds on the branches,
Sing out their song,
My love for this moment,
Pulls me along.

I walk to the top,
Of the hill that we loved,
And there are those memories,
Right there from above.

The town that we shared,
Many years have passed by,
Our heaven right there,
Bringing tears to my eyes.

Although you are gone,
The memories remain,
To just start all over,
To relive it again.



Jayne Louise Davies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 25 April 2023

Very good imagery, I felt I was there on the hill too.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 25 April 2023

This took my breath away TFS

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Jayne Louise Davies 25 April 2023

Thank you LeeAnn x So appreciate your comments x

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 April 2023

Wonderful. When nothing happens as you desire, respect the desire of God and take life lightly sans bothering for anything dear poetess. A fantastic poem

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Jayne Louise Davies 25 April 2023

Thank you Dillip x So pleased you liked it : ) x

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