Be there
Take my body
And hold me dear for I shall fall
Take my hand
And comfort me keenly for I shall weep
Take my mouth
And kiss me passionately for I shall live again
Take my soul
And love me tenderly for I shall be cherished
I like this one the best of what I have seen, so far. Word choice, flow, and brevity were all effective.
I like this poem's repetition of beginning words. It gives the poem a crispness that conveys a lot of meaning with simple words. The words are very carefully chosen. This is the ideal poem to read because it is short and very poetic. I hate to read long poems. Very good poem.
for such a young age you have a very strong hold on words...in the words of sherrie, strong and beautiful sums this poem up perfectly...never stop writing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i like it. its cute, yet it has a very strong voice. you like good charlotte? me too...