It was as comfortable as a worn set of flannel sheets.
He was my shelter,
a tin roof without a leak.
I was so content and cool
waking up in his strong arms.
And I admit not being able to resist
my tender lover's charms.
I'd gaze at him
in loving awe.
I couldn't help but
look right past
each freckle,
every flaw.
Very good! ! Ya! ! I remember my 'first love' I can so relate Sydne
it is true.. in your first love you can not sense his flaws, you think he is perfect! great work! HBH
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great poem...I remember my first love........Ah memories. Anyway great poem Amanda, Take care, Jay x