A shattered soul floats through the darkness
Like a ghost it goes unheard, unnoticed
Fading in and out of time like wind fades in the distance
Coverd by depression, bursting with fear and despair
Once shining bright now dull and dark like a shadow
Doomed to wander the darkness faceless to the world
A shattered soul floats through the darkness
Alone, abandoned, without a doubt forgotten
I have been reading your poems and they are very emotional, well versed and a joy to read. I think you should keep writing. My only critique is to watch your spelling. I really liked this poem but I was a little thrown at the words ' dual and dark' 'doomed to wonder' and 'without a dout'. It threw the mood off a little and I wondered if you meant: 'dull and dark' doomed to wander' and 'without a doubt'. You are one of the few who can understand the joy of words.: -)
'A shattered soul...' beautiful and moving poem this - very well done, Steve
*Crys for the entire night* Evy...I love you so much. You are so much like me. I love your poems and they touch me.I have never in my life read a poem that has touched me the way yours do. They are all good and you should write more of them and don't let anyone make fun or say you can't write them... Love, Jess
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Aaay i thought this was off the chain ... very vivid and descriptive It reminds me of one of mine 'Lurkin in my loneliness' Check it out sometime if you like Catch ya later Leo