Grace Poem by Deborah Loraine Kean

Grace

Rating: 5.0


Thank you
That is enough for some
But not for me
I need something
New

I am broken inside
It is all very well
For me to hide
Let everyone see the shell
Of the old

But where is the new?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Xxx Xxx 11 September 2006

I liked the way you have pictured the thirst for some deep longing...I guess i understood it well...this is not enough, how could that to be enough? I deserve more, indeed you guessed right sincerely, Albert

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Steve Hagget 08 September 2006

Very nice poem - sensitive and subtle, Steve

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David Darbyshire 08 September 2006

The new is inside you, just let it out, Love dave nice poem Debbie

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