Heartbreak Hotel Poem by Dixon Irene

Heartbreak Hotel

Rating: 5.0


I sit here in a dark
empty room and wait for
you to turn around and
come back into my life.

It seems that I have
checked into the heartbreak hotel
and i can't leave yet
until you come back through my door.

The things that you said to me
are still running through my mind
like a roller coaster, going crazy
on the tracks.

What reason did I give,
for you to leave me with
this heartbreak? Do you
even know how bad it hurts to say your name.

People surrounding me
asking what is wrong
all I can mutter is that
my stay was very long at heartbreak hotel.

If you would just open the door
then I could be relieved of this
burden that I have been carrying since
you walked out on me.

Please don't leave me
with this hole in my heart
heal me, take me back
and promise to never leave again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Punctuated with pain that that flows from the fountain of a broken heart. Very nice indeed.

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Silence Dogood 26 November 2008

I love the title heartbreak hotel interesting and captures the eye the poem was alright the lines were well written and overall it was well composed with a story and deep emotions

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