Keep It To Yourself! Poem by DM W

Keep It To Yourself!

Rating: 5.0


Those who blurt out their inner most feelings
On Facebook; forever chasing street cred,
Are, in my refined eyes, unappealing
For I think, a still tongue keeps a wise head.
One thing is for sure I won't let it eat
Up my precious time. There are so many
More edifying things to do.Like meet
And greet people face to face; or any
Good poem, novel or art work will suffice.
Why choose hell when one can have paradise? !

Keep It To Yourself!
Monday, August 31, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: social media
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dominic Windram 02 September 2020

Thanks Shaun for your perceptive comments. You're so right about selfies..such a nonsensical, narcissistic way to behave I think. People who engage in this type of behaviour could explain it to me, until the end of time and I still wouldn't get it!

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Shaun Cronick 31 August 2020

I'd rather choose Paradise than H e l l Dominic and if they went there they'd probably take selfies. Hoping they'd be more loved in social circles. And I label selfies as another word for selfish. And they spell words even on job application CV's in textspeak. Grt 4 u an i. You've need to have worked at Bletchley Park to decipher it. A full score and that's the way it is. Many thanks and take care.

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