Wrong Again Poem by Patricia Gale
Wrong Again
Wanting you to be someone you were not
Thoughts of love changing the way you are
My love could cure it all
Wrong again
Giving, taking all I could
Filling your cup to the brim
My love could consume you
Wrong again
Showing you what real love is
Guiding you down a lovers path
Trying to open your eyes, see what love has to offer
Wrong again
Thinking time could erase your haunting memories
Love spun magic would twirl it all away
Hoping love could make you a changed man
Wrong again
Now regretful words
Fill your lips and believing they could make it better
You drained my soul and have come back wanting more
Wrong again...........there is no more
A captivating piece Patricia. Finely delivered and with a great last line.
You drained my soul and have come back wanting more Wrong again...........there is no more, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , great poem, , thanks
perfect stanzaic form, the refrain rhymes so well..the last stanza concludes the upper three...overall beautiful composition
You came across with a surprising yet strong statement there at the end, kinda caught me of guard, Well done again Patricia, Love duncan X
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I would like to translate this poem
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5/6/2024 2:30:26 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Nice poem, you picture love as something not perfectly lasting which can be true depending on the factors that created it. Regards.