I have had you times before.
But day by day, I want you more.
You have my love, my soul, my heart.
I belong to you, yet we are apart.
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The way she walks,
Such grace, such beauty,
Had I not seen her legs I would have thought she was floating.
Her face is a glowing beauty, more radiant than the sun,
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What The Heart Wants
I have had you times before.
But day by day, I want you more.
You have my love, my soul, my heart.
I belong to you, yet we are apart.
Why did I let you go, my love?
I know my heart has had enough.
It's broken, tattered, far from new.
But everyday I still want you.
Do you notice, cant you see
I want you to belong to me.
I love you and you love her.
I'm falling apart in a world of hurt.