001 Will You? Poem by Sandhya S.N

001 Will You?

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Don’t be angry on my missteps
I do, while I dance with you
As my anklets wish to jiggle
So softly to hear your heart

Don’t blame me on my hoarse voice
While I chorus with you dear
As my larynx wish to sing
So softly to merge your soul

Don’t stare for my dowdy look
Although wearing florid stones
They say they can’t outwit those
Shining glare, your lovely smile

Don’t leave me for dispirited deeds
Insensible, cold and pale even
As I can’t express my dear self
Although, a tide does twirl inside


Sandhya
12.11.2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Manu Jadwani 12 November 2009

I m honoured to be the frst one to comment on this..in one word its simply nice

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Chandrashekar A Posy Poet 12 November 2009

wah....wah... a beautiful composition............

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premji premji 13 November 2009

sandhya, i envy on you dear..... for you, poetry is a never ending song..............

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nicely requested.. as a man should.. good poem sir.

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Kesav Easwaran 26 November 2009

nice feelings...nice expression...nice joyous tides inside...happy times Sandhya...happy poem indeed...10

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 20 November 2009

a poem gentle passion beyand which modesty will dare to be expressive. i loved it. shan marks 10

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Indira Babbellapati 19 November 2009

no one will, after reading such sweet poem!

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 19 November 2009

good poem.............................

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Sandhya S.N

Sandhya S.N

Thiruvananthapuram, Kerala, India
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