A thick grey mist
covers me in its heavy cloak
shrouding my life with mystery
my thoughts become invisible
I feel afraid and confused
unable to explain how I feel
you never understood what I said
just laughed it off and walked away
leaving me alone once more
deep inside my head
it seems that I have lost my mind
I know that I have lost my way
trying to find the right path
to avoid the rejection
I feel inside my heart
I now can turn to no one
to give me a helping hand
I cannot explain the pain I feel
no one would understand
The mist slowly rises
lifting up its cloak
revealing my thoughts again
the sun comes out
from behind the clouds
banishing the mist
filling me with renewed hope
Knowing that, if this is you. Even after the art of love is call. Vividly. The divorce part has its sight. Yes, don't give up. Silly hurts but remain hopeful for someone.
Wow, , , When I'm reading this I saw again myself and my tears fall down again...The hurt always in my heart even though I forgive him already Like what I said the scar still remain cause my heart belongs to him....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
another Wow poem, and i thought of wow before i read the other comments. really. not that such sentiments haven't received attention by poets before now [and i'm no expert at anyone else's poetry but mine], BUT the treatment, the smoothness, the love? you have given this is [almost] amazing, though i don't know what [really] amazing would look like. to MyPoemList. - - - - - - my favorite stanza: it seems that I have lost my mind I know that I have lost my way trying to find the right path to avoid the rejection I feel inside my heart............... beautiful. i hope you used a topic for PH like love, so love fans will be more likely to see it. but let me take a look at the 'crocodile' poem i saw a little farther down in your poem list. thanks for sharing. bri :)