2 Lovers Poem by Pradip Chattopadhyay

2 Lovers

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On her course merrily flows the svelte rivulet
She meanders not alone carries the sky on her breast.
In him grows a longing, love flowers in his heart
She doesn’t know it, on the sea is set her heart.
The two flows embraced in unrequited passion
The sky ferries his lover to her beloved ocean.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 22 September 2013

Chatto nice poem nice feeling thank for sharing

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Dave Walker 22 September 2013

A wonderful little poem, a great write.

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Prasanna Mishra 29 April 2014

As soft and sweet as love could be. The Line swiftly and quietly enter the heart. Thanks.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 04 May 2014

I loved this poem. I think it is excellent.

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Georgina Murray 23 May 2014

Wish there was more!

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Chinedu Dike 26 April 2020

A concise and insightful rendition in verse with rhythmic splendour. Lovely and very passionate.

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Narayanan Kutty Pozhath 29 April 2018

Beautiful words explaining the love between two

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Kewayne Wadley 21 June 2015

A very charming write! I throughly enjoyed reading!

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Heather Wilkins 18 October 2014

in him grows a longing love flowers in his heart she doesn't know it on the sea is set her heart lovely worded

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 27 August 2014

Simply phenomenal write.......Pradipji......great imagery.......you are amazing..........

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