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Rookie (3/5/1962 / Dubuque, IA)

2 Twinkling Stars - Poem by mestup poems

Across a sky of indigo blue
On a cold and lonely night
Two twinkling stars hung silently
Just out of each others sight

Each star looking wistfully
At a moon that turned to blue
Wishing on another star
To find a love so true

Then a comet streaked across the sky
They stared in star struck wonder
As if drawn by some greater force
They moved toward one another

Suspended in the heavens
The stars began to dance
Spinning ever gracefully
In a heavenly romance

Two twinkling stars in the heavens
Now shine as one sparkling light
Across a sky of indigo blue
Suspended in the night.

Comments about 2 Twinkling Stars by mestup poems

  • Rookie Ron Flowers (12/30/2008 3:55:00 PM)

    Simply beautiful.

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  • Rookie - 30 Points Andrew Blakemore (4/28/2008 2:46:00 PM)

    You have created some fine imagery within this piece. Well done. Andrew (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Peter James Davidson (3/25/2008 1:36:00 PM)

    sweet words.....

    thank you for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,819 Points David Harris (3/11/2008 11:36:00 AM)

    What a wonderful rhythm that runs though this delightful piece. Trips off the tongue for an enjoyable read. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 11, 2008

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