2 Twinkling Stars Poem by mestup poems

2 Twinkling Stars

Rating: 5.0


Across a sky of indigo blue
On a cold and lonely night
Two twinkling stars hung silently
Just out of each others sight

Each star looking wistfully
At a moon that turned to blue
Wishing on another star
To find a love so true

Then a comet streaked across the sky
They stared in star struck wonder
As if drawn by some greater force
They moved toward one another

Suspended in the heavens
The stars began to dance
Spinning ever gracefully
In a heavenly romance

Two twinkling stars in the heavens
Now shine as one sparkling light
Across a sky of indigo blue
Suspended in the night.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ron Flowers 30 December 2008

Simply beautiful. Regards Ron

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Andrew Blakemore 28 April 2008

You have created some fine imagery within this piece. Well done. Andrew

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Peter James Davidson 25 March 2008

sweet words..... thank you for sharing

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David Harris 11 March 2008

What a wonderful rhythm that runs though this delightful piece. Trips off the tongue for an enjoyable read. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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