Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Veteran Poet - 1,547 Points (Baltimore, Maryland)

#251 Haiku Blaze Of Sunset - Poem by Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Explosion of clouds
Bursting blaze of sunset
As day becomes night


3/17/08


Comments about #251 Haiku Blaze Of Sunset by Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

  • Rookie R H (5/11/2008 8:42:00 AM)

    An intensely visual snapshot contained withing these 17 syllables - you captured those fierce moments of colour as day becomes night... lovely. justine. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie David Desantis (5/9/2008 1:17:00 PM)

    I just wrote a poem saying 'as day becomes night' weird....but yours has alot more power in 3 lines than mine did! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 19, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 25, 2008


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