Explosion of clouds
Bursting blaze of sunset
As day becomes night
3/17/08
I just wrote a poem saying 'as day becomes night' weird....but yours has alot more power in 3 lines than mine did!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An intensely visual snapshot contained withing these 17 syllables - you captured those fierce moments of colour as day becomes night... lovely. justine.