(3: 50) Am Poem by Jesse Swedlund

(3: 50) Am

Rating: 3.1


My work becomes short,
My wit burns slight.
My noodles are soggy,
It’s time to say goodnight.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rahman Henry 19 November 2015

Short yet a lovely poem: 'My work becomes short, My wit burns slight.'

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Kim Barney 19 November 2015

If there's anything I hate, it's a soggy noodle, especially at 3: 50 a.m.! Great little poem, though: short and sweet. Congratulations on having it chosen as poem of the day!

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* Sunprincess * 19 November 2015

........wonderful poem....congratulations ★

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John Richter 19 November 2015

Cute.... at my age though I would be in a coma by 3: 10! But I've been there often friend... Good poem...

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Liza Sudina 19 November 2015

How hard is your work! preserve your noodles!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 19 November 2015

Short and sweet soliloquy in the form of a marvelous poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Jesse Swedlund

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