4 Mistakes To Much Poem by Stephan van Pinksteren

4 Mistakes To Much

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Taking my body was the first mistake,
Tearing It apart was the second.
Oh please depression go away,
So I can be free one day.

Slicing and cutting me wildly,
The blood flows out,
As I walk silently,
I'm asking myself what's it all about

Destroying my heart was the third mistake.
Stealing my soul was the fourth.
Oh please depression go away,
So I can be free one day.

You laugh at me.
I'm shattered and broken.
You torture me.
My life meaningless and unspoken.

You can't make mistakes again
For I'm blessed with death.
Oh depression you've gone away,
I also left that very day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allenika ... 20 August 2009

you are really good at expressing yourself. its a good thing. great poem.

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Eyan Desir 08 July 2009

Very goood well expressed good job

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