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Jon London (5/3/2008 12:45:00 PM)
Very funny...I love this..well composed
thanks for sharing..made me laugh.10/10 |
James B. Earley (4/20/2008 4:34:00 PM)
There is pained truth in those three last lines! Thanks my friend. |
Abha Sharma (3/24/2008 8:53:00 AM)
humour made the Love more wonderful...many gesture are told antithetically....to be clear... Beautifully expressed. |
fanniesson - (8/21/2007 1:53:00 PM)
the middle stanza of this poem
described a lot about
long term relationships I think
and for me makes the poem
a memorable one |
Zen Bojczuk (7/10/2007 3:19:00 PM)
I think this is the first poem of yours that I have read. Seems I will be reading many more. Unfortunately, there is much truth in your poem. Well written. Zen |
fanniesson - (7/8/2007 6:26:00 PM)
A true poem
from someone married or with someone
like me |
Tara Sloblock (7/7/2007 3:08:00 PM)
Some might say bitter and twisted... I'd say, there's a whole lot of truth in these here words... caustic but perfectly penned....the element of wit with the wisdom shines as ever. t x |
Chris Mendros (7/6/2007 12:42:00 PM)
ain't love a scary thang, tho? |
Alison Cassidy (7/5/2007 7:59:00 PM)
I do hope this was a penned in a fit of pique. By god, it's clever though. And soooo true. There is no hate like the hate that is fed by 'true love'. Succinct and witty and honest too. Fine poem. love, Allie xxxx |
Not a member No 4 (7/1/2007 11:15:00 AM)
Pithy, insightful poem produced by a switched on mind. You've said it all here Elysabeth, and said it very well. xx jim |
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