6: 15 Am Poem by Kim Dang

6: 15 Am

Rating: 5.0


Murmuring in the background lies the twang of guitar strings
Cooperatively overlapping, not interrupting, the sound of morning avians, calling.
Their foreign tongue harps to me in octaves and E notes, guileful.
Slower than the gentle sway of willow leaves,
than an important wrinkled deliberation.

A manufactured message just concerning life.
Setting free my idling soul, the one residing in those darkest moments before dawn.
I want to smash myself against your wide smiles.
I want to open century old champagne bottles.
And down it all like childhood ambrosia.
My Welch's grapefruit juice.

I want to thrust at you the happy endings.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mel Vincent Basconcillo 19 April 2009

the title is mysterious and the poem is brilliant

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Patrick McFarland 03 August 2008

Nice poem Kim. It has the feeling of a Haiku without actually being a Haiku. Very original.

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