The RONDELET consists of seven lines. Lines One - three - seven have four syllables and are identical. Lines Two - four - five - six have eight syllables. Line four rhymes with line three and lines two - five - six all rhyme with each other. A - b - A - a - b - b - A simple! This poem consists of five consecutive thematically linked RONDELET.
Two hearts as one
Two hearts that beat in unity
Two hearts as one
Throbbing together - on and on
Beating without mpunity
In harmony - in unity
Two hearts as one.
Seeing your face
Has made my enpty heart rejoice
Seeing your face
So full of beauty - full of grace
So makes me long to hear your voice
My Angel you're now my first choice
Seeing your face.
Hearing your voice
Has made my poor heart leap for joy
Hearing your voice
Every word makes me rejoice
Your voice all pain and fears alloy
You give me pleasure like a toy
Hearing your voice.
Feeling your kiss
Revives my frozen heart again
Feeling your kiss
Transports me to a realm of bliss
A realm where my heart feels no pain
A realm devoid of stress and strain
Feeling your kiss
Making sweet love
My heart in harmony with yours
Making sweet love
A love that's blessed by God above
A love that lovliness adores
A love eternal - without pause
Making sweet love.
(John Knight - Subzero Colchester - 9 January 2010)
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An beautiful description of craving for an unreachable love.Thnx for sharing.
A love eternal - without pause Making sweet love......what more is there great write regards
OMG, I loved this poem so much, I actually shed a tear, and the poem was so great! ! ! keep writing those lovely poems of yours.
What a great love! & What a great and romantic poem! ! You always teach us Mr.John....10 Indeed~
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wow. this is one of the great poem i read.. i would want to read more of your poems. thanks for sharing.