977: You Cared Once... Poem by Amit Biswas

977: You Cared Once...

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Earlier when I had taken ill,
You cared, and I knew you will,
You came to see me with your stetho,
Cared much more than you treated,
The care and love it had gotten,
I wished ill I remained,

Ill am again,
To see me, you didn’t remain,
Even the info you got was just casual,
Asked How are u, to be cordial,
Could not reply in pain,
Wish my heart stopped forever,
Not to be ill again.

(June 1,2006)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catastrophe King 13 March 2007

You have a heart so pure.... God Bless! It's so good that you care... but, it is wrong to be wishing to be breathless! Cheers man.... you have some lovely lexis hidden inside you... just go ahead and compose!

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Amit Biswas

Amit Biswas

West Bengal, India
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