Treasure Island

Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean


(A) 17 (LOVE/PASSION) I WISH YOU TO UNFOLD ME ~


I wish you to unfold me
I wish you to hold me
I wish you to undress me
I wish you to bless me
I wish you to ravage me
I wish you to savage me
I wish you to blaze me
I wish you to daze me
I wish you to love me
Love me to death
I wish you to smother me
Smother me with your love
I wish you to inspire me
Inspire me to sing
Sing with you
Together
Where we can view
and feel
A garden of paradise

Submitted: Tuesday, February 06, 2007
Edited: Saturday, January 08, 2011

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  • Shelley L Baxter-Stanley (4/24/2007 1:45:00 AM)

    Great poem that holds alot of truth about what we wish and want from a love relationship! Much emotion was expressed in this well written piece...and then I liked how you wrapped it all up in the end...
    Great job 'Tranquil Ocean'...Keep up the good work,
    ==Shelley== (Report) Reply

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