Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean


(A) 49 (LOVE/PASSION) THIS IS CRAZY


A shadow with me all day
No body
This is crazy, this is crazy

Notes of a scintillating flute
No flutist
This is crazy, this is crazy

Breathtaking verse on paper
I was sleeping
This is crazy, this is crazy

Vermilion laden sky
Sunrise or sunset?
This is crazy, this is crazy

Dishevelled clothes, swollen lips
You came in my dream
I am crazy, I am crazy

Or is this the only sanity? ?

Submitted: Saturday, February 10, 2007
Edited: Tuesday, January 11, 2011

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  • Shelley L Baxter-Stanley (5/9/2007 12:44:00 AM)

    Wow I just love the repetitiveness in each verse..it pulled everything together so nicely.You hold so much talent for keeping the reader interested and for that I thank you...and your topics are usually always relateable which is another plus.
    Very profound thinking expressed in this one and just a all round Excellent poem!
    Take care of U
    =Shelley=
    10/10! (Report) Reply

  • Shelley L Baxter-Stanley (5/9/2007 12:44:00 AM)

    Wow I just love the repetitiveness in each verse..it pulled everything together so nicely.You hold so much talent for keeping the reader interested and for that I thank you...and your topics are usually always relateable which is another plus.
    Very profound thinking expressed in this one and just a all round Excellent poem!
    Take care of U
    =Shelley= (Report) Reply

  • Alison Cassidy (2/22/2007 5:44:00 PM)

    Crazy, maybe, but very sanely and artistically expressed. A pleasing mix of a dream-like hallucination and thoughtful philosophy. You express the intangible with great clarity. love, Allie xxxx (Report) Reply

  • dhainee pfafflin (2/12/2007 3:28:00 AM)

    wow... people from this site are deep... well, what am i to expect... people here are poets, , , nice poem though! (Report) Reply

  • Raghavan Warrier (2/11/2007 12:34:00 PM)

    Agree with everyone else. Surrealistic or out of body experience nicely conveyed and we all had similar experiences. Excellent write (Report) Reply

  • Geoff Warden (2/10/2007 10:41:00 PM)

    To dream is to subconsciencly voice whether crazed or sanity, , , , , loved this read, , , , (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 863 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (2/10/2007 12:16:00 PM)

    A modern slant on 'A DREAM WITHIN A DREAM', perhaps? ...Excellent slice of surrealistical verse, young lady....you are playing on my every weakness...Dreams...The Mind & The Darkside...all my favourite topics of lit.. & research...Great work, T.O.
    F.J.R. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Linda Ori (2/10/2007 11:03:00 AM)

    Sometimes it's difficult to separate dream from reality. After all, we do create them both, only on different levels of thought. Been there, done that - totally know what you mean! Great little piece, TO.
    Linda :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Tara very irritated with PH injustice (2/10/2007 5:30:00 AM)

    I know exactly what you mean. (The mark of a good poem, to have readers entirely relate?) Fine line between craziness and sanity. Katie Meluah (? spelling) 'this is the closest thing to crazy I have ever been....'. (Might be misquoting) . Yep. t x (Report) Reply

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