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(A) 49 (LOVE/PASSION) THIS IS CRAZY

A shadow with me all day
No body
This is crazy, this is crazy

Notes of a scintillating flute
No flutist
This is crazy, this is crazy

Breathtaking verse on paper
I was sleeping
This is crazy, this is crazy

Vermilion laden sky
Sunrise or sunset?
This is crazy, this is crazy

Dishevelled clothes, swollen lips
You came in my dream
I am crazy, I am crazy

Or is this the only sanity? ?

Submitted: Saturday, February 10, 2007
Edited: Tuesday, January 11, 2011

Comments about this poem ((A) 49 (LOVE/PASSION) THIS IS CRAZY by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean )

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  • Fallon Hunter (10/23/2012 10:50:00 PM)

    Can I use this in a book im writing?

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  • Shelley L Baxter-Stanley (5/9/2007 12:44:00 AM)

    Wow I just love the repetitiveness in each verse..it pulled everything together so nicely.You hold so much talent for keeping the reader interested and for that I thank you...and your topics are usually always relateable which is another plus.
    Very profound thinking expressed in this one and just a all round Excellent poem!
    Take care of U
    =Shelley=
    10/10!

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  • Shelley L Baxter-Stanley (5/9/2007 12:44:00 AM)

    Wow I just love the repetitiveness in each verse..it pulled everything together so nicely.You hold so much talent for keeping the reader interested and for that I thank you...and your topics are usually always relateable which is another plus.
    Very profound thinking expressed in this one and just a all round Excellent poem!
    Take care of U
    =Shelley=

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  • Alison Cassidy (2/22/2007 5:44:00 PM)

    Crazy, maybe, but very sanely and artistically expressed. A pleasing mix of a dream-like hallucination and thoughtful philosophy. You express the intangible with great clarity. love, Allie xxxx

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  • R R (2/19/2007 12:36:00 AM)

    Excellent poem Tranquil, with great emotion.

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  • dhainee pfafflin (2/12/2007 3:28:00 AM)

    wow... people from this site are deep... well, what am i to expect... people here are poets, , , nice poem though!

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  • Raghavan Warrier (2/11/2007 12:34:00 PM)

    Agree with everyone else. Surrealistic or out of body experience nicely conveyed and we all had similar experiences. Excellent write

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  • Geoff Warden (2/10/2007 10:41:00 PM)

    To dream is to subconsciencly voice whether crazed or sanity, , , , , loved this read, , , ,

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  • Ernestine Northover (2/10/2007 3:14:00 PM)

    A difficult decision of balance there TO, but crazy or not, a good piece.
    Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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  • Duncan Wyllie (2/10/2007 12:17:00 PM)

    The serenity and beauty and passion...I LOVE IT! , REALLY!
    Love duncan X

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