(a) 49 (Love/Passion) This Is Crazy Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(a) 49 (Love/Passion) This Is Crazy

Rating: 3.7


A shadow with me all day
No body
This is crazy, this is crazy

Notes of a scintillating flute
No flutist
This is crazy, this is crazy

Breathtaking verse on paper
I was sleeping
This is crazy, this is crazy

Vermilion laden sky
Sunrise or sunset?
This is crazy, this is crazy

Dishevelled clothes, swollen lips
You came in my dream
I am crazy, I am crazy

Or is this the only sanity? ?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geoff Warden 10 February 2007

To dream is to subconsciencly voice whether crazed or sanity, , , , , loved this read, , , ,

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Raghavan Warrier 11 February 2007

Agree with everyone else. Surrealistic or out of body experience nicely conveyed and we all had similar experiences. Excellent write

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dhainee pfafflin 12 February 2007

wow... people from this site are deep... well, what am i to expect... people here are poets, , , nice poem though!

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Ernestine Northover 10 February 2007

A difficult decision of balance there TO, but crazy or not, a good piece. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 10 February 2007

The serenity and beauty and passion...I LOVE IT! , REALLY! Love duncan X

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Fallon Hunter 23 October 2012

Can I use this in a book im writing?

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Wow I just love the repetitiveness in each verse..it pulled everything together so nicely.You hold so much talent for keeping the reader interested and for that I thank you...and your topics are usually always relateable which is another plus. Very profound thinking expressed in this one and just a all round Excellent poem! Take care of U =Shelley= 10/10!

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Wow I just love the repetitiveness in each verse..it pulled everything together so nicely.You hold so much talent for keeping the reader interested and for that I thank you...and your topics are usually always relateable which is another plus. Very profound thinking expressed in this one and just a all round Excellent poem! Take care of U =Shelley=

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Alison Cassidy 22 February 2007

Crazy, maybe, but very sanely and artistically expressed. A pleasing mix of a dream-like hallucination and thoughtful philosophy. You express the intangible with great clarity. love, Allie xxxx

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R R 19 February 2007

Excellent poem Tranquil, with great emotion.

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