A Beautiful Mind Poem by Hemendra Singh Deopa

A Beautiful Mind

Rating: 5.0


Midst a weary night,
Under the moon light,
The weariness got me thoughtful,
Thinking about many lives.
Of wonderful men and women,
Their stories and their pride,
also got me thinking, about those who are just alive and have been dead inside their head,
Many times in a single life.
Well it also got me peeking inside,
I pushed myself and shook me well just to ensure I am also alive.
It got me deeply pondering,
Why there is such misery for many, I was wondering.
I got the clue that lit my mind, and I realised,
in fact it's all about our mighty mind.
That opens the door,
Glides you through,
Makes us strong and
strengthens our core.
So the mind is the key,
God made it, as it has to be,
Similar overall yet unique for all.
To take care of the mind,
nourish it to flourish it,
do whatever you got to do, to roll on the positive side,
If you and I are able to do, I can assure,
You will sale through, small or giant any bloody tide.
If you concur with me,
Take care of you mind, drive it slowly, towards the positive side.
Because as I say,
living a worthy life is all about living with a beautiful mind.

Sunday, July 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams,life,mind,thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 01 July 2018

There are three elental forces, mind, uniqueness and positivity. You have combined them in your poem. Bravo! To understand that the mind is all you have risen above all. I have many poems on this elemental forece that is all we are and ever will be.++++++++++++++10

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Yes indeed because mind is the source of all the energies we have so we have to take care of it and thank you a lot for your comments it's really is a booster. Much love, stay blessed.

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Jazib Kamalvi 06 June 2020

Write comment. Such a nice poem, H. S. D. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 01 July 2018

Fine and lofty verse elegantly brought forth in persuasive expressions with insight. Beautiful motivational piece set aside for sober reflection. A witty creation. Thanks for sharing Hemendra and do remain enriched.

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Thank you so much sir :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 July 2018

Under the moonlight thinking about many lives is amazing. Taking care of beautiful mind is always very nice. This poem is wonderfully worded and beautifully created poem...10

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Thank you so much sir.

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Robert Murray Smith 01 July 2018

A beautifully crafted write. Impressive.

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Robert Murray Smith 01 July 2018

Correction elemental.

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