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A beautiful morning? (c) 4-23-2010

Oh what a beautiful grey sky
What I thought was a beautiful day
I freakin thought I could frolic through flowers
But I guess that went away

Submitted: Friday, April 23, 2010
Edited: Tuesday, May 04, 2010

Comments about this poem (A beautiful morning? (c) 4-23-2010 by Corey Threet )

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  • Ibrahim Bidu (10/1/2010 9:59:00 AM)

    Wow! Short, powerful!

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  • warner treuter (6/5/2010 1:59:00 AM)

    But it's still there! Just close up that umbrella and put the rosy sunglasses back on. Flowers need rain, ya know. And be yon merry poet through the windowpane.

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  • Ujjol Kamal (5/31/2010 4:15:00 PM)

    nice work
    keep writing
    keep growing

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  • Ken E Hall (5/28/2010 3:21:00 AM)

    Funny beaut day but sure not long enough but the humour saved the day
    uavanice1 regards

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  • Moonbee Canady (5/24/2010 8:52:00 PM)

    Corey, This One Made Me S M I L E! (and Haven't We All Experienced What It Said) ... Good One... MoonBee

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  • Alfred Cawe (5/6/2010 6:45:00 PM)

    You should extol yourself for this poem....It's short but the message is 'LONG'.....I like the fact that u did not waste words...Thnx 4 sharing

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  • Katherine Wheatley (5/6/2010 1:23:00 PM)

    real kl! short nd swet haha!

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  • Lora Cooley (5/5/2010 8:04:00 AM)

    i like this its really awesome

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  • Jodie Scott (5/4/2010 5:45:00 PM)

    Short but sweet, i like it :) xx

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