Corey Threet

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A Beautiful Morning? (C) 4-23-2010 - Poem by Corey Threet

Oh what a beautiful grey sky
What I thought was a beautiful day
I freakin thought I could frolic through flowers
But I guess that went away

Comments about A Beautiful Morning? (C) 4-23-2010 by Corey Threet

  • (10/1/2010 9:59:00 AM)

    Wow! Short, powerful! (Report) Reply

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  • (6/5/2010 1:59:00 AM)

    But it's still there! Just close up that umbrella and put the rosy sunglasses back on. Flowers need rain, ya know. And be yon merry poet through the windowpane. (Report) Reply

  • (5/31/2010 4:15:00 PM)

    nice work
    keep writing
    keep growing
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  • (5/28/2010 3:21:00 AM)

    Funny beaut day but sure not long enough but the humour saved the day
    uavanice1 regards
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  • Moonbee Canady (5/24/2010 8:52:00 PM)

    Corey, This One Made Me S M I L E! (and Haven't We All Experienced What It Said) ... Good One... MoonBee (Report) Reply

  • (5/6/2010 6:45:00 PM)

    You should extol yourself for this poem....It's short but the message is 'LONG'.....I like the fact that u did not waste words...Thnx 4 sharing (Report) Reply

  • (5/6/2010 1:23:00 PM)

    real kl! short nd swet haha! (Report) Reply

  • (5/5/2010 8:04:00 AM)

    i like this its really awesome (Report) Reply

  • (5/4/2010 5:45:00 PM)

    Short but sweet, i like it :) xx (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 23, 2010

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 4, 2010

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