Corey Threet

Rookie (Buffalo, New york)

4ever My Friend (C) 3-29-2007 - Poem by Corey Threet

4ever my friend you will always be
and you'll always be the number 1 girl to me
I know we've known each other 4 so long
and the friendship we've built has always been strong
but days go by me wishing that we didn't have such a bond
Cause all the love I feel for you keeps building on and on
I don't want you to think I'm sweating you or I'm like a stalker
I would tell you face to face but I'm really not much of a talker
Maybe it's because you actually count as someone I love
Or just that your a tease sent from below or fallen from above
I understand we don't share the same feelings like the romance
But how can I be judged if you've never given me any chance
Everything I probably said may sound corny or cheesy
But I really and truly love you hopefully, you'll believe me
If not I really don't care my feelings will never bend
But I'll know everyday of my life you'll be 4ever my friend


Comments about 4ever My Friend (C) 3-29-2007 by Corey Threet

  • Gold Star - 41,411 Points Chinedu Dike (6/5/2015 3:19:00 PM)

    A heartwarming love poem, well articulated and subtly penned from inner recesses of the heart. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Rookie - 248 Points Kamini Arichandran (11/8/2010 7:23:00 AM)

    Simply Beautiful ~ A definite A+! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,613 Points Seema Chowdhury (10/26/2010 7:56:00 AM)

    very nice and a sweet poem.
    when a poem is written with love and care it flows like a magic.
    And this poem surely does.
    enjoy your life and take care (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Mohammad Akmal Nazir (10/25/2010 12:34:00 PM)

    You have expressed your thoughts very well. Love is the only invincible thing in the world. And when you love someone and ready to do anything for him or her, your love attains culmination. Fortunate is the friend who has this kind of lover. I really like the poem. Keep on going. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Mohammad Akmal Nazir (10/25/2010 12:28:00 PM)

    You have expressed your thoughts very well. Love is the only invincible thing in the world. I really like the poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 67 Points Star Crossed Lady (10/22/2010 11:33:00 AM)

    I loved this poem. It in my eyes is a true poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Tiffany Ann (9/30/2010 10:49:00 AM)

    that was amazing i think everyone should feel that way about someone and tell them about it i hope everything works out for you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lyncoln De shedsh (8/16/2010 11:55:00 AM)

    Awsome dude, this is exactly how i feel about a special person in my life..keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Taylor Niemi (6/13/2010 12:20:00 AM)

    This is really cute! And I love it, awesome writing skills, keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie J Lopez (6/11/2010 9:24:00 PM)

    love it. I can totally relate to this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Madi Maxwell (6/8/2010 10:50:00 PM)

    Fantastic poem, kind of reminds me that women can be ignorant to. Keep on writin -Madi (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Marisa Harmony (6/5/2010 7:37:00 AM)

    This is an amazing poem. When I was reading it, a soundless movie was playing in my head. A man and a woman destined to be, but the woman blind from it. I give you A++. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie warner treuter (6/5/2010 2:06:00 AM)

    Virtuous poem showing high-mindedness. Such breeds happiness so long as you don't expect such always from others. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Janaiya Stephens (5/24/2010 8:21:00 AM)

    Aw, it's super sweet! ! Whoever it is seems like a lucky girl. (Or is it metaphorical?) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tim George (5/20/2010 10:59:00 AM)

    Grow up, get laid, and learn a new language. Did you pay those guys to write
    all those comments or are they all in the same highschool as you? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Holly Cee (5/12/2010 10:46:00 AM)

    gr8 gr8! this is a great poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/7/2010 6:47:00 PM)

    If not I really don't care my feelings will never bend
    But I'll know everyday of my life you'll be 4ever my friend
    *Virus 12 - Shy, ....very deep and honest feeling for friend.. this should be the spirit.. i liked the wordings and its placement..well done, , , ,10

    read mine miss i miss u.. Mary to marry.. cry not (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Anita Khelawan (5/4/2010 5:29:00 PM)

    oh my goodness i love dis poem i understand completely,
    words like dis surely make me smile
    if were 2gether we'll have a poetic child
    ..... but on a real i'm loving wrds an dnt know why
    i cud good on an on but for now i'll settle with a sigh
    Honestly i love it :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ayan Dasgupta (4/26/2010 8:23:00 AM)

    Well it is great in the sense it expresses the wanton in an open and straight manner... genuinely sensitive! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Grace Gardiner (4/26/2010 5:05:00 AM)

    Very beautiful poem, great work! :) (Report) Reply

Read all 99 comments »




Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 29, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, February 22, 2012


[Hata Bildir]