That the eyes burning …….. Intense inferno
Don’t afraid you friends The eyes can
Smile heartful in the hellhole A bite
Of being apart imposed on Love tuneful
Captured right he and she Foaming tempestuous sea!
Said- come on love …………Swim to sense the yummy YUMMY!
-August,2009-
I like the way you have written this Sarwar, thanks 10 Lynda x
lovelt write.. i lov ehte creativity you used in forming it.
A lovely new style of poetry stemming from a creative poet!
SARWAR, YES, YOU'VE VENTURED INTO A NEW GENRE, ONE YOU CREATED, AND IT'S FUN TO READ. WHAT I ENJOYED MOST IS THE SENSITIVITY, THE IN-THE-MOMENT CONNECTION TO FEELINGS AND TRUE DISPLAY OF HONEST EMOTIONS. THANK YOU!
Your style takes a little getting used to, but once the reader has done that, its pure magic.
Crisp, sweet love poem.A few metaphors used nicely.Well done Sarwar
Sir..this is indeed a very creative piece...compelling...the title is what attracted me the most..I loved it..10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You are one of kind indeed Sarwar..., .... this again is very entertaining and nice to read.. as always I read it like couple of time, very musical and nice to read..10+++ cheers// best wishes shan