Treasure Island

aziz soubai

(1981 / Tan tan)

A boring day


It is a nightmare for me to be here
sitting in the boring room drinking beer
waiting for the coming of a new day
hoping all my pains would go away.

The same people were on the street
the same faces that i usually meet
I sat upon my couch thinking
of the humdrum into which i was sinking.

But with the arrival of dawn
my whole routine was gone
And i realized that there is still light
in the gloomy world with which we fight.


Written By Aziz Soubai@

Submitted: Wednesday, July 23, 2008
Edited: Wednesday, August 13, 2014

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I was so sad when i wrote this poeme. When i finishes i felt a great sense of reliefe

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  • Dawn Slanker (8/6/2008 11:01:00 AM)

    A life is only as boring or mundane as you allow it to be. Nice poem expressing what many of us feel with a message of light and hope in the end. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • , aryaindia (7/27/2008 7:51:00 PM)

    There is much meaning and steadfastness in your writing that I observe. Good luck and god bless you. arya (Report) Reply

  • **Pirate** Love*~Magic~Man (7/23/2008 7:04:00 PM)

    Its the beer that makes me sick, , i can't drink...but i do look forward to seeing
    the new sunrise of tomarrow..A new day Anew adventure on the horrisen...
    nice poem, , AZIZ.. (Report) Reply

  • C T Heart (7/23/2008 6:40:00 PM)

    A boring day makes me sick...but waiting for tomorrow, a new life to break the ice....... (Report) Reply

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