aziz soubai

Rookie - 10 Points (1981 / Tan tan)

A Boring Day - Poem by aziz soubai

It is a nightmare for me to be here
sitting in the boring room drinking beer
waiting for the coming of a new day
hoping all my pains would go away.

The same people were on the street
the same faces that i usually meet
I sat upon my couch thinking
of the humdrum into which i was sinking.

But with the arrival of dawn
my whole routine was gone
And i realized that there is still light
in the gloomy world with which we fight.

Written By Aziz Soubai@

Topic(s) of this poem: boredom

Poet's Notes about The Poem

I was so sad when i wrote this poeme. When i finishes i felt a great sense of reliefe

Comments about A Boring Day by aziz soubai

  • Rookie Sharmila Saheed (9/11/2008 1:26:00 AM)

    hey nice rythm aziz it was intresting and cool (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Dawn Slanker (8/6/2008 11:01:00 AM)

    A life is only as boring or mundane as you allow it to be. Nice poem expressing what many of us feel with a message of light and hope in the end. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Brian Hinckley (8/4/2008 3:07:00 PM)

    Not bad at all. The night is dark before the dawn, death and rebirth. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eman Awad (8/1/2008 8:33:00 PM)

    Nice poem, deep but nice
    Eman Awad (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Papillon Alamy (7/31/2008 4:08:00 PM)

    It's really full of deep meanings it's better than it seems congra' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points , aryaindia (7/27/2008 7:51:00 PM)

    There is much meaning and steadfastness in your writing that I observe. Good luck and god bless you. arya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie **Pirate** Love*~Magic~Man (7/23/2008 7:04:00 PM)

    Its the beer that makes me sick, , i can't drink...but i do look forward to seeing
    the new sunrise of tomarrow..A new day Anew adventure on the horrisen...
    nice poem, , AZIZ.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie C T Heart (7/23/2008 6:40:00 PM)

    A boring day makes me sick...but waiting for tomorrow, a new life to break the ice....... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 23, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 13, 2014

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