A Brand New Day Poem by Tia Maria

A Brand New Day

Rating: 4.9


Uninvited thoughts, corrupt a verse
And poetry, you become a curse
Memory, you can be so unkind
Your constant ability, to remind

And radio, sometimes you don't belong
You are so cruel, it's very wrong
I decided to move on, today
But then that song, you had to play

And as for you, lousy weather
I suppose you think, you very clever
You knew my plan, to have some fun
But took away my friend, the sun

But like this season
Emotions are strange
Without any given reason
it will all just change

And Spring will surprise
and brighten away
All those unwanted thoughts
of a grey yesterday

And life will simply just, carry on
and take us to wherever we, belong
There may be a few clouds, along the way
But they will make way, for a brand new day

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tanya Stanford 15 August 2008

Brialliant use of use to express emotions. One of my favorite poems I've read today. Love the use of rhyme and seasons. Lovely piece of work.10/10

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Ron Flowers 22 August 2008

I love the optimistic message expressed here. Ron

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Kris Smith 27 August 2008

Forward thinking in this piece of magic, yes a good write your future holds so much for you with this frame of mind, smiles ahead of yourself 10 Chris

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 10 September 2008

Now this was a cheerful and delightful poem, great read! Loyd

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Ashraful Musaddeq 20 September 2008

Marvelous poem. Last stanza is amazing. A moving composition with magnificent metaphors,10 for it.

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Henry Brown 18 July 2009

Tia Maria Is that your real name? It is like your poem, it flows and it rhymes! ! ! ! ! ! Very nice

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Bursting with beauty. Thanks for making my day.

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Junior Pocoloco 07 May 2009

Your poem is fresh and natural. I know and have lived this poem. You have a fan here in California. Good day to you Raymond

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 22 March 2009

There may be a few clouds, along the way But they will make way, for a brand new day.........wonderful lines........Show must go on..........10+++

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Anthony Pierre 25 February 2009

This poem opened my eyes, really liked it, im only young but i hope to develop as good as that

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