A Breakfast In Bed Poem by David Harris

A Breakfast In Bed

Rating: 5.0


Woke up this morning
and I could see
was my breath in front of me.
Dawn had awoken
without the sun,
just a bone freezing wind.
I decided my best option
was to stay were I was,
after all it was my day off.
I got up long enough
to put the kettle one,
made myself some cereals
and a very hot drink.
Then scurried back to bed.
I had a breakfast in bed
made by myself.
In bed, I was going to stay
for another two hours or more
as I had nothing really to get up for.

22 March 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I am who i am, was good medicine for me, would you look at my, young heffolant, and other rhymes, i would love to hear what you think good or bad. thanks, i write childs rhymes and silly things, bye for now, a like minded soul

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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 October 2008

Beautiful piece.10+

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Melvina Germain 20 April 2008

Well that certainly sounds cozy, I certainly agree with JoJo and Allison, a heater would be nice indeed. Very nice poem David, a big (10) from me. Melvina

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Alison Cassidy 30 March 2008

Strange - yesterday I began a poem called 'a slow day'. It had the same sort of theme as this one (isn't finished yet either) . But I agree that it's wonderful on occasion to just stop and leave life alone? Your morning sounds most appealing, but I have to agree with JoAnn about the heater LOL. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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JoAnn McGrath 29 March 2008

you need a heater in that bed....LOL

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