A Bridge Across The Stars Poem by Floyd Zimmerman

A Bridge Across The Stars

Rating: 4.9


Two worlds, cruel fate, two worlds apart.
Don't cry my dear, when it gets dark
We'll build a bridge across the stars
To mountains, moons and golden hearts.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Very nicely written about death..I gave you a ten..

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Jen Capaldi 08 September 2009

floyd your poem was beautiful. you were able to capture so much in so little words. i hope when you are finshed your bridge it leads you to your golden heart. i am sure it is waiting for you. Jen

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C. P. Sharma 08 September 2009

Succinct and profound. CP

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 09 September 2009

an optimistic bridge! see it through to the bitter end. keep bulding! never say die! you would reach it!

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Angelic Warrior 09 September 2009

beautiful little write :) ....taken to the heart.....profound and lovely..... 10++: D

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Maria Barbara Korynt 16 September 2009

I like it very much. Beautiful and clever text. (10v.) Greetings.Maria Barbara Korynt

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Obinna Eruchie 13 September 2009

Floyd, what a beautiful piece.

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Omar Ibrahim 13 September 2009

a bridge through the stars! ! ! wonderful expression and a stunning poem....keep writing please!

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Marieta Maglas 13 September 2009

nice surrealistic poem, thank you for sharing................10

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Young One 12 September 2009

you do have a way with words, i do have to admit though, i didn't really understand this one, you sould explain it sometime. all the same, good job

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