A Brief Departure Poem by Vishnu Pranam

A Brief Departure

Rating: 4.5


Your presence always bring
the bliss and an alluring spring,
all over my heart
and that is your imposing art.

Now its time for me to go away
and literally I have to push each day
very hardly, with a sweet pain
to see my soul again.

Promise, we meet soon
before next full moon.
And with you I walk along
to the dreamworld where we belong.

Sunday, January 1, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: departure,girl,girlfriend,goodbye,life,love,love and art,marriage,pain,romance
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 02 August 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Vishnu. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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Vaishali Bhardwaj 02 January 2017

SOFT TOUCH..BEAUTIFUL POEM VISHNU JI

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