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A Broken Heart

Many parts to my broken heart,
from the day when it fell apart.
My whole world came crashing down,
but its fell with out a sound.

All the love that you stole,
left me standing in a hole,
from the day my world fell apart,
I'm standing here with a broken heart.

A second that passes feels like an hour,
all my emotions have turned sour,
feeling all hollow and left alone,
my heart has turned to solid stone.

A broken heart was the death of me,
its now so simple to see,
isnt it better to atleast fall,
than to never of loved at all?

Submitted: Saturday, September 30, 2006
Edited: Thursday, September 30, 2010


Comments about this poem (A Broken Heart by Kev Elmer )

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  • Cheneth Jane San Diego (6/27/2008 5:16:00 PM)

    Well written... Another painful experience I guess...

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  • Claire Jones (2/26/2007 11:49:00 AM)

    Another beautifully expressed poem!
    CJ.xx.

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  • Kelly Allen Vinal (10/1/2006 4:56:00 AM)

    Most excellent structure and wonderful presentation, even if it is a sad topic!

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