A Challenge Poem by Afshan Fatima

A Challenge

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Have you ever tried to win
all the challenges you face begin,
or you sit and do nothing
and get tense from within?
In the past if it was so,
that you never let the worry go,
you probably had never taken the pains
to overcome your fears and strains.
Don't worry dear
as the past is gone.
You still have today
and tomorrow's dawn.
Be calm and careful as you walk the line,
even before you realize,
you will have left a mark
on the sands of time...

Friday, October 24, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: motivation
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I penned this poem on December 6'2013.I tried to include all the three tenses(present, past and future) in this poem. Hope you will enjoy it.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 24 October 2014

Movement in life is most essential ye conveyed the message nicely and concluded with positive - you will have left a mark on the sands of time.. great message in deed. thank you

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