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Ben Gieske
(9/5/2008 7:57:00 AM) |
A lot said with these two contrasting images of desert and ocean storms. The image of dew in the desert fits in nicely conveying the sense of temporality as well providing more meaning to a man thirsting. Something is lost in the second stanza since we cannot hear the song. “The years demand light heart” is puzzling to me.
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Duncan Wyllie
(2/15/2008 1:21:00 PM) |
Dear Will
This is stunning and if it was meant for me then how embarressed I should feel for not having found it before, I am so, so, sorry if this is the case
You know that I admire you and your works
Love duncan X
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Esther Leclerc
(1/25/2008 2:03:00 PM) |
Just beautiful, this offering of complex simplicity. Why is it that simple truth is often the toughest to grasp, to embrace? ... Deep roots and a light heart, yes. It doesn't just happen... Again: beautiful. Thank you, dear friend.
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Brian Dorn
(12/11/2007 2:30:00 PM) |
Perspectives change with time (and age) . Some for the worse, but others for the better. I think poetry (for one) tends to improve with age. Your perspectives are always interesting, Will ... that's the mark of great poetry!
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Melvina Germain
(11/22/2006 8:09:00 PM) |
Few words, powerful and beautiful at the same time--Love it--Melvina
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Tailor Bell
(10/22/2006 5:32:00 AM) |
as said before, eloquent. beautiful philosophy and thoughtful messages in your verse. strong work, Will. -Tailor
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Sandra Fowler
(9/5/2006 6:22:00 PM) |
This is an eloquent tribute. You are a fine songsmith, Will.
Kind regards,
Sandra
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