A Cluster Of Lily Of The Valley Poem by ritty patnaik

A Cluster Of Lily Of The Valley



playing hide and seek
in the mellowing sunny breeze,
hidden in the stream side,
the leaves a deep green hue..

bashfull and pretty,
shyly hidden in the leaflets,
a cluster of scented fragrance,
swaying in the breeze,

growing together,
a field of whiteness
bells hanging down,
almost like being ashamed

so pretty when i spied her,
my love, lily of the valley.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sreejith Kulaparambil 15 May 2010

this is sweet little poem.. abt lily really beautiful....

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Bob Blackwell 09 February 2010

Ritty, you made a lovely picture in my mind, it also reminded me of where I came from, childhood memories of soft clusters of bells. Bob

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Prashant Shaurya 07 February 2010

this is something i like you for right from the time when i first read you, madam.. and you are one of the finest imagery creators and you bring out the beauty so very well.. i have become a fan.. and madam tell me how to do it like you.. regards prashant

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Debasish Mishra 02 February 2010

Is it simply beautiful? ? ? I am arrested by the majesty of thoughts! ! !

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