......A Conversation Poem by subodh pandey

......A Conversation

Rating: 5.0


A droplet of rain
rolls on the curves of a leaf
a bird swirls its neck.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 03 August 2013

Wonderful use of nature, I can picture rain rolling on the leaf and the bird swirling it's head. Your poetry is like little pictures of moments in your mind. Thank you for sharing with me. RoseAnn

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Elena Sandu 09 July 2013

Very beautiful! Thank you for share!

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Unwritten Soul 29 May 2013

I just imagined this scene...wow nature sound wonderful with your lil words! _Soul

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Michael Oliver 25 April 2013

I like the curve of leaf's implied echo of the birds neck and thel movement of the water all separate entities and yet a single thought expressed as a simultaneity I see the master has not lost his touch

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