Large shadows loomed
On my heart
I was unable
To dispel the gloom
After loosing my love
Utterly
A blood of despair
Filled the room
Abruptly
A sunflower came
Removed
The horrible
Sense of doom
Casting the rays of hope
On my heart
Everywhere
Roses in bloom
When she smiles
Coquettishly
My heart begins to beat
With a soundless boom
(2008/7/24)
A self expressive and very well composed poem. Correct me if I understood wrongly I would say: She is sweet, She is all smiles; Her innocent smile Can take you miles. After darkness, There is sun shine; Your courtyard flower Gives you new love line. Peels of her laughter Fill you with joy, You can play safe With the divine toy. In her you realize The fulfillment of life, She brings you out of The life’s all strife. You call it bliss, Or call it boom; It silently enters Into your room. God bless her.
An elegant read here, with the message of hope, that will remove this gloom! *10*! best regards Friend Thad
Amire you took all the words and i'm running out of saying nice nice nice i like hidden feeling
Nightingale, You hearts shines with boundless kindness and love, fine poems....10... Tsira
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You found light at the end of the tunnel, a well-penned optimistic poem Nightingale, 10 Lynda xx