Be my apostrophe before S
I'll second that motion
The possession beyond space and time
When the nude love swims in our notion
Give me a glass of wine darling
A glass of love potion
No I need more ecstasy
A dropp of your eyes' ocean
(2008/12/28)
I love the last two lines of this poem, excellent work, Happy New Year Nightingale 10 Lynda xx
The eyes have it here! They rounded off the poem beautifully. A love poem of true art. Karin Anderson
wow you amused me again with this poem... a fine love poem... nice
you do amuse with your ardent poems....! lovely! ! ! indeed....ardent!
No I need more ecstasy A dropp of your eyes' ocean. very romantic to the point of becoming. thanku dear poet. tony
Give me a glass of wine darling A glass of love potion No I need more ecstasy A droop of your eyes' ocean Beautifully composed love poem.Well expressed Well done Col Muhammad Khalid khan
A lovely poem, a truly ardent love expressed in a unique style.I love it! Thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
If you second that motion an have a glass of wine and love potion, i got the notion that a dropp from her eyes ocean, might be too much - emotion..? Another splendid read Shiraz! *10*! ! Friend Thad