A Corrupted Perspective Poem by Eden Hurley

A Corrupted Perspective

Rating: 3.5


Sometimes
It’s hard to notice
Your sunglasses
Are cracked.

Sometimes
It’s hard to detect
Your view’s become
Abstract.

It can be hard
To realize
That something’s
What it’s not.

But once you have
You can regain
The reality
You forgot.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carolyn Brunelle 22 July 2008

Well said Eden! nice work.

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, aryaindia 22 July 2008

I believe that if you keep writing persistently like you have done here straight from your heart, you will find yourself on top some day. Regards, arya

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Eden Hurley

Eden Hurley

Guelph, Ontario
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