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A Daughter Cries

when a mother cries
her tears stab at her daughter's heart
as they plummet to the floor

when a mother cries
he daughter cries too
because her heroine is wounded and she doesn't know how or why
she cries because she cannot rid her mother of the pain
she cries most of all because she loves her mother

when a daughtrr cries because her mother cries,
her mother cries more
because her weakness has hurt her child
she cries because it hurts to know she's the cause of her daughter's tears.
she cries most of all because she loves her daughter

one the tears have ceased however
love remains
the love forever shared between a mother and her daughter

Submitted: Tuesday, July 17, 2012
Edited: Wednesday, July 18, 2012


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  • Mark Dillon (8/20/2012 2:55:00 AM)

    oh, stop, stop, stop, your making me cry too.

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  • Just Me (8/2/2012 12:22:00 AM)

    Good job! Keep writing!

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