A Day Awakens Poem by anil pillai

A Day Awakens

Rating: 4.3


A day awakens, A ray of hope injects,
will it be among the clouds!
optimism will be at stake,
But that's life dear! ! !

Empty at heart,
didn't bother to take it away,
still it swept by
I didn't knew that it was draining
under my feet,
it was late
very late.

Can I or...
Why this obstacles,
why did u create those humps,
you could have decided earlier,
But.......its sheer! !

copyright 2016
anil pillai

Wednesday, October 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: awakening
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 28 October 2016

A lovely depiction of a spiritual awakening through beautiful imagery. Finding the light or the truth is always a good experience. An enlightening read.

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Anil Pillai 31 October 2016

THANK U

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