A Few Words … Poem by GOPIKA RADEESH

A Few Words …

Rating: 5.0


Walking through the deep dark woods,
Meadows underneath and starlit skies beyond.
Betwixt the twinkling stars, I found you
But then you did recede apace.
As I wandered all around,
Madly hunting your course,
You favored me with mere setbacks.
I lost my path as my quest for you thrived,
In the pervasive depths of the beryl
And in the ceaseless empyrean azure.
You fluttered but I never did perceive.
My endeavors to bag you were just futile.
Years fell of alike wilted leaves and melted crystals.
Soon did I skip your thoughts obtusely.
As I rushed behind your bogus glints,
Never once did I notice the radiant crescent,
Who waited thirstily amidst the burning pang.
In the long run, did I realize the flakes and freckles
Of your mind, muddled and baffled was I.
You lost your gleam, you lost your gallantry,
You were no more the blood stained words.
I walked solely in the memoires of the great compatriot.
Tears did never spurt, my amour remained unsaid.
Still there was the crescent of beauty,
Waiting eagerly to express the final words of the beau.

A Few Words …
Tuesday, February 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: alone,lost love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 18 April 2022

A few words but so precious...loved this fabulous poem...5 stars

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Naila Rais 09 April 2018

A deep breath poetry.... Expressed greatly.... Keep courage ... I would like you read my poems and express your views too... Deserves 10+++ Naila

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Siddartha Montik 28 February 2018

Such wonderful words.. so few but densely Packed with full meaning! Thank you for sharing Poet.10! !

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