Eila Mahima Jaipaul

Rookie (11/26/1971 / New York)

A Fine Pair We - Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

a fine pair we
you, with lack of passion trust
I, with love balanced on edge.
could you but understand
passion, once sparked
takes on a life all its own
constantly growing and breathing love fire
like an erotic shimmering golden dragon
could I but accept
the simplicity and elegance
of your desire
because it just is.
something akin to the sun
it doesn't ever leave
it just disappears, because it must
oh yes dearest heart
a very fine pair we.

Comments about A Fine Pair We by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

  • Rookie - 0 Points fanniesson - (12/11/2006 9:57:00 AM)

    as love poems go
    this is up there
    with the best of them (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Rookie Kelly Allen Vinal (11/11/2005 7:04:00 AM)

    Just stunningly romantic! (Report) Reply

Read all 2 comments »

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 10, 2005

[Hata Bildir]