Juan Olivarez

Freshman - 828 Points (september 12 / nyssa oregon)

A Frog And A Toad - Poem by Juan Olivarez

A tiny frog on a lili-pad,
Was so depressed she felt so sad.
She wrung her hands and racked her brain,
And said to herself, I'm going insane.

I'm in love with the toad that lives next door,
When my dad finds out he'll go through the floor.
And I can't imagine what mom will do.
My black and green will be black and blue.

While she pondered on, the snake swam by,
And the little frog uttered a sigh.
She asked hey snake what would you do,
If you were in love with a toad like lou?

The snake replied, I'll tell you what,
You really put me on the spot.
A frog I could love, a toad too fat,
I'd rather be seen with a rat.

But you little frog with your leopard spots,
I think that you could dot my dots.
Come over here and say to me,
That you'll be mine for eternity.

The little frog opened her eyes,
And saw in the snake no truth just lies.
She jumped in the water and swam away,
And found her lou and said o.k.

It's not so bad to be black and blue,
And have your daddy be mad at you.
It's better to be with an ugly toad,
Than inside a snake and growing cold.

4/20/10 29 palms ca.

Comments about A Frog And A Toad by Juan Olivarez

  • Rookie Constance K Yost (2/14/2011 5:43:00 AM)

    This is so clever and cute-great fun to read! Constance (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Eman Obied (8/13/2010 6:25:00 PM)

    I love the story within the poem! it's funny and deep too. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lynn Glover (7/7/2010 6:27:00 PM)

    A very cute ditty and written to let us know that frogs have our problems also. The little frog made a wise decision. Lynn (Report) Reply

  • Rookie growing out of a shatterd dream (5/21/2010 11:52:00 AM)

    i like the story of the poem it is great and it makes sence (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Taylor Dixon (4/20/2010 10:43:00 PM)

    I really like the story this poem tells. Awesome job! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 20, 2010

Poem Edited: Thursday, November 18, 2010

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