(1st September 1959 / Edinburgh)

What do you think this poem is about?

A Gay Virgin?

What am I thinking of?

The past? A long lost love?

I need help from above

Just to give me a shove


I’ll travel near and far

To where the lovers are

Take a spin in my car

To catch a fallen star


I don’t know what to do?

Is my love something new?

Are we the chosen few?

Drink Champagne from his shoe


Do you think that I’m prude?

I’m just not in the mood

You’re being very rude

I thought you understood


I can’t see you today

Tell me to go away

Sorry, what did you say?

You think that I am Gay?

Submitted: Thursday, August 07, 2008


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  • Keith Foley (9/3/2008 11:33:00 PM)

    I liked the way this poem was layed out. But found it a bit abstract from itself, a bit scattered and maybe that was the point. Interesting title. Have to read it for just that reason alone.10 for originality.8 overall.

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  • West Tranny (8/29/2008 10:56:00 PM)

    A one sided conversational tone to this verse, is that correct? Nice poem.

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