I Feel So Tired Poem by Gordon David

I Feel So Tired

Rating: 5.0


I feel so tired, I just want to go to bed
I feel so tired, I’ll just curl up here instead
I feel so tired, I just want to go to sleep
I feel so tired, I’m sick of counting sheep
I feel so tired, I can’t even think
I feel so tired, I haven’t had a drink
I feel so tired, I’ll just lie on the floor
I feel so tired, like I’ve never felt before
I feel so tired, I may have lost the plot
I feel so tired, and feeling oh so fraught
I feel so tired, but cannot close my eyes
I feel so tired, I keep wanting to apologise
I feel so tired, I really shouldn’t complain
I feel so tired, it must be all the strain
I feel so tired, please don’t ask me why
I feel so tired, I’ll just lie here and die

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C T Heart 06 August 2008

too much stress, the whole being in great distress...Oh! my... just came from that...rest and sleep with a work of a pill a great help with my doctors ( hehehe) ...Nice piece, well penned...

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Sadiqullah Khan 06 August 2008

yes the tiredness, , , , sometimes one feels exactly that way, ,10

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Corey Threet 05 August 2008

Oh man I get that way too where I get so tired that I'll sleep anywhere as long as I'm not bothered. Excellent piece you continue to Impress me. Remember Spread yourself! ! ! !

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