A Gift Poem by Deborah Cromer

A Gift

Rating: 4.6


In just one, whole, single day
What can one possibly say
Our world in times such as thus
When we together again can be us
We must only love one another
Pray up towards our Holy Mother
Inside a moment as this one
Kneel down and bless what God had done
Go fast past evil and earthly things
Place your heart where his love sings
Rise above all that is wrong
Enter into beauty and glorious song
Take off, go, please be free
Let all that is righteous be
Journey, fly, a trip you must take
A decision that only you can make
Discover now all that is good
Become who you are and be what you should
You will reach the point then you will know
How much his love has made me grow

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Twilight Dreamer 29 June 2009

This is truly so beautiful. The gifts we are givne we should be thankful, grateful and smile with great admiration. Very enjoyable.

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Wonderful poem about faith.you should open a facebook account and add some of your poems as a link.A ten.

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Tom Bulfin 29 June 2009

A poem full of joy and hope.

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Nikunj Sharma 02 July 2009

A decision that only you can make Discover now all that is good Become who you are and be what you should You will reach the point then you will know How much his love has made me grow Your words attract and your poems are magnetic.... great msg in them...pls read my poems called MY DREAM, HOLD A MIRROR and CAN I?

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Nikunj Sharma 02 July 2009

A decision that only you can make Discover now all that is good Become who you are and be what you should You will reach the point then you will know How much his love has made me grow Your words attract and your poems are magnetic.... great msg in them...pls read my poems called MY DREAM, HOLD A MIRROR and CAN I?

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Dr.subhendu Kar 02 August 2012

togetherness etches gold in history heart soars high melding int blue journey genuflects to tune times earth knows songs of love being engrossed, wonderful write yet ingenious,10++++, thanks for sharing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 August 2009

We must only love one another Pray up towards our Holy Mother Inside a moment as this one it is gift from HIM and we should not fail him... it is wonderfyl and fertile idea so sure to be impacted in our mind.. lovely presentation....10 read mine go back....o, mother...o.lord...prayer

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Omar Ibrahim 26 August 2009

very good.........i like your poetry very much so please dont stop writing...

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Rajaram Ramachandran 20 August 2009

Life is God's gift, which should be utilized for the good of all. Well composed.

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Andrew Blakemore 01 August 2009

A really beautiful love poem Deborah, you are a very talanted poet. Best wishes, Andrew

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