A Great Soldier Yet To Be Seen..... Poem by Ravi Sathasivam

A Great Soldier Yet To Be Seen.....

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The day when I met you
Your attitude impressed me in my mind and heart
You are known to everyone as a great yesterday
soldier for our country.
You were distinguished soldier, an officer,
a man among men.
You are the most valuable gift for our country
Your contribution to the World War II is unforgettable.
Your Knowledge on military is a precious gift for
our young soldiers.
You loved our country and you did the best for her.
Today, you are away from us, living by yourself
Your marched forward legs are stands still today.
You be the best what ever you are and where ever you are.
But the love you have shown on us will
cherish in our heart forever.
As bible says LOVE is patient and kind
and let that faith surround you.
You are a great soldier for the all time
and yet to be seen


Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka

Copyright ©2004 Ravi Sathasivam

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
archana sharma 03 August 2008

a well written tribute! archana

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Chitra - 07 August 2008

a great tribute, well deserved indeed

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Sandra Martyres 14 April 2009

A well deserved tribute to a soldier...nicely written

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 08 June 2010

Yes Sir… Yes Sir… Yes Sir… I’m a soldier …destined for country …and also citizen … A fighter …for the country… 10/10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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To be ultermost sincere, it is a great poem of appriciation.

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Sakkthi subramaniyam 07 November 2009

A intolerable pain marched into heart. This should be dedicated to all soldiers who kissed their eternity in some cause during the wars that world tasted. Impressive poem

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As bible says LOVE is patient and kind and let that faith surround you. You are a great soldier for the all time and yet to be seen....means pioneer position even in Holdy book and their destination is to be seen heven i.e. martyrdom...... beautiful write... Read mine 'Martyres'

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Shashendra Amalshan 08 June 2009

Hello sir, 'As bible says LOVE is patient and kind and let that faith surround you. You are a great soldier for the all time and yet to be seen' see sir..you know what is the best weapon for a soldier...is it AK47...Dragnov or Hand Grande....no sir...soldiers best weapon is love...... and that's what i ment/// and i feel you v bought it out perfectly...this is a great tribute a great soldier indeed... god bless him regards with love shan

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