(!) A Haiku Poem by Alice Cuenca

(!) A Haiku

Rating: 5.0


sunlight on my back
I, facing my own shadow,
five inches taller

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sonya Florentino 07 April 2009

interesting...and quite intriguing. Are we mere shadows of ourselves?

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Mifael Llauderes 07 April 2009

a playful, childlike observation captured in few simple words... fascinating the child in this reader.: -) myself looking better on my shadow.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 07 April 2009

sunlight on my head I, facing my own shadow, hiding underneath my body............................Good Write.......10+++.......

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Fiona Davidson 06 April 2009

Great haiku Candice...so much said in so few words but filled with images....10

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