Make me part
Of your solitude
Where your thoughts
Glow like the moon
I want to occupy
Those spaces
Where you keep
The waves of silence
Keep me
Where you keep the torch
Light me with your imagination
You and I
Like the fantasy of a child
Existing in the impossible.
The poetess makes a humble request before the unseen divine power to mingle her poetic soul in his great realm of solitude, the abode of peace and tranquility where she can explore purity of her mind and soul and can embrace all facets of imagination and creativity in serenity. (Part 1)
Your "you" here is God and "I" is the innocent child in you. Appreciated this excellent poem from its philosophical perspectives!
Exquisite poetry. Choice of words, their progression, the closing of the poem, all left me so elated, enamoured.5* and added to MyFavourites, Nosheen. Loved the poem.
This is what poetry is all about! To leave readers enveloped in the praise of esteemed poets is not an easy task. Nosheen, you've done it marvelously well with this exquisite poem.
For the reader to reach and also love and keep. Simply superb
Now, that's real poetry! Feelings, hinted at but so deep, they jump out of the page
I can't get over how absolutely stunning this poem is ---------I want to give it a million stars--it is worth at least that much--also faving this
This is so lovely --it has an extraordinary sense of simplicity and complexity at one and the same time---you light up PH with your imagination! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Superb piece...... thanks for sharing.....